pirateplatypus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Secret Rocket]

I think it worked really well.

I liked the mixture of different visual styles. Though there are two minor issues. The clickable area on the play button is so small that it was hard to find, maybe you could increase if so that instead of having to click on just one section of the letter "L" you can click anywhere on play. Also, there was a thin white line on the left side of the flash throughout the whole movie. Otherwise it was really well done.

perpetual-mind responds:

Thank you for the review!
I'm glad to hear you like the look of the experiment!
You SHOULD be able to just click anywhere on the play button...
It works for me, but I'l test it on a few other computers when I get the chance!
As for the white line, thats something I noticed myself just after uploading, unfortunately theres no way I can fix it.

The original is a movie file, like the one on YouTube.
The flash version is a conversion, but the size doesn't seem to quite work and no matter what scale I set it to there is always a white line on one side of the box.
I'l have to make sure to test the dimensions out before I make my next video!

[My Dr. Who Fan Fiction]

Sorry to "geek out" but,

I know fan fiction doesn't always play consistently with the stories, but Amy Pond never knew the 10th Doctor (That I'm aware of.) So wouldn't it have been better to either use one of the 10th Doctor's companions like Donna or use the 11th Doctor instead?

cheese-man responds:

dont TELL ME WAHT DO TO

[Asian & Tech Support]

Entirely too accurate...

This brings back flashbacks from working in a call centre for a satellite TV provider. Well done.

[Daedalus & the E.M.M.]

Sounds cool, but doesn't load

The concept sounds really cool. But all I get when I load the page is a black screen. I hope you fix this because it sounds like a cool concept and I'd love to see it.

[Player Played]

I like it, needs sound

Considering the constraints of only being able to use one type of shape and only tweens, you did a great job. I got a kick out of the plot. I think it would be perfect with the addition of sound, that is assuming that you are allowed to add sound.

[Suicide :)]

Good for a laugh

I quite enjoyed this. The animation seems to be done pretty well. The music fits in nicely. It made me laugh on a number of the deaths. The only thing I'd change is that it would loop a bit smoother if you faded the music at the end just a little more and at the beginning I'd fade the music in. Also, at the end , the last letter of Kebab is cut off. All in all it's well done.

DoctorP1 responds:

Yeah when i watch it on my PC i can see the whole kebab. But on someone els its just "Keba" in a different font. I think its because the font I used isn't a default font i downloaded it :) And thanks for the review bro :)

[The Amazing! (Super guy)]

Great SFX

I found it quite amusing. The animation is fairly simple but it works. I love the sound effects. The pogo stick sound makes me laugh.

UhLaiJah responds:

Thanks a bunch!

[The Roach Expedition]

Lip syncing was a bit off.

I liked it. Though the audio seemed to play too soon so it had a Godzilla effect where the lips were moving way after the sound stopped.

Brewster responds:

its not supposed to be like that but thanks.

[Y Is Marijuana Not Legal?]

Hillarious but kill the music

I laughed my ass off, but I barely made it through it with that damned music.